Sweet and beautiful. That's what I would like to tell about your art style. Also the story is going splendidly. ^^
That looks good! The lineart is quite smooth, I mean look at the hands! At least it is better than when I'm the one drawing
True fact, my friend. Tho I usually smudge because of making uselessly many lines while I can make a single line.
Reallll.Why does it look so good when others do the bolder and blacker art style? But when I do it,it looks like a Friday crappy hairstyle...