Just an idea concerning Ron & Beacrox lately Spoiler so I'm thinking that Sui Khan aka Team Leader sir, actually spilled the beans to them at some point, and Ron isn't saying anything about it just so he can keep fucking with Cale. and about Kim rok soo & the Thames family Spoiler I'm thinking that he was originally supposed to be born into that family, maybe even as Cale's twin or older brother. I originally was thinking Cale's uncle, but I keep thinking about how people compare Deruth and Kim Rok Soo, how alike they are. They've been called alike more than once. But y'know, poor Kim Rok Soo got kicked out of his body. I have considered that maybe the parents of Kim Rok Soo were simply the equivalent of Deruth and Violan in their world, but idk. I think Kim Rok Soo being the twin brother of Cale who had his body stolen by someone who later on killed his entire family is more tragic, especially when you consider he was put into his brother's body (who died from the events) so he could defeat his own stolen body. Plus, I just really like the idea of Kim Rok Soo reuniting with the family he was supposed to have.
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Character writing :- Characters are inspired from people around your life Characters can also be inspired from the media you read Characters can also be a personificyaik force of nature Characters can also be a personification of a trait A character can be flat and one dimensional A character can be round and multi- dimensional A flat character is based on a single trait For example A man who is quick tempered and often gets into trouble because of it. It simply his nature A round character is based on a character on multiple traits which have a harmonised mixture, with a healthy dichotomy between traits. Dimensions can be made of two traits which are placed in single character is a way that a dichotomy exits between these two traits Example A man is very kind but becomes very cruel and beast like when he see other people acting cruelly. A background of a character can be built by first starting with the motivation of the chararacter Example A knight becomes rouge in order to avenge the unjust death of his liege. A character can also be developed in ones mind by imagining them accompanying you in your daily life Eg You can imagine a character with you when you visits a library. If you see them running excitedly for books you might say you character is a book worm, or if they remain aloof then they are not much of reader. If your characters remains around a certain section of the library then maybe they like a particular niche. Example Ask questions like ‘What if the knight accompanied me to the library’?’ ‘Would they like history, martial arts or something altogether different?’ ‘Would they follow me around the library’s or would they wait at the entrance guarding the library form suspicious people?’ The character can also be impacted by the pervading themes of the story. And setting itself usually contains or personifies themes which then impact the character through the setting. Internal character of a character can be imagined based on the external appearance of a character Example Draw a chararcter with many external features. Or based on a photograph or painting of a real life chararcter one can imagine a fictional chararcter. A person who is wearing a simple military uniform Amy’s be imagined as strict military man or a thin skinny man may be imagined a deceptive and contriving. A character’s reception can also be influenced on the perspective and tone of the writing. Second person point of view forces the reader in a character’s mind. A tone which focuses on the psychology of the character versus one’s which maintain a difference from a character can influence how immersive the character appears to the reader. Distance from the character can alos create a sense of mystery, suspense and horror if used well. The protagonist heavily influenced the lense and tone of narrative. So the technique of using multiple perspectives tends to add a certain richness to a narrative. Depending on the aim harmony and sense between perspectives will give clear sense of progression to a reader. While a broken, unharmonious, not completely clear perspectives will work if the aim is to create a sense of unease and disturbance in the mind of the reader. When describing the perspective of the character the manner in which description takes place can be useful for portraying the nature of the character especially if it s first person point of view. Example A vain man :- I could see the preety chandeliers hanging from the ceiling, the guest in the venue were wearing dresses made of exotic animal fur. As I walked around I heard a man casually boast and open a hundred year old wine bottle simply to impress some lady. Everything looked pretty and overflowing with richness. Inside my soul I felt a certain hunger which was neither physical nor spiritual. Rather it was more primal desire. The Hunger of greed.
Reverand Insanity Do you have your own novel? That you made? Because you seem like you would be a good webnovel author so I want to know if you've made some stories of your own. Like I would read it.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/supernatural-crime-(lout-of-the-counts-family)_25514151105122905 Here is a TCF fanfic I wrote about Cale transported in his sleep to an alternate TCF world filled with crime like ‘Gotham city’ https://m.webnovel.com/book/i-got-t...ndfather’s-unfinished-novel_26359440906107105 This is another transmigration story I wrote about an MC getting transported into historical-crime novel. https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-tra...edogawa-conan-kudo-shinichi_20118687905691405 This is another fanfiction I wrote which is about Edogawa Conan getting transmigrated into a villanese in roman story and having to collect ‘Mystery’ points in order to able to return back to his world https://m.webnovel.com/book/team-leader-kim-rok-soo_23525165306355905 This is yet another TCF fanfictIon I wrote about Kim Rok Soo’s Team Leader days and the enemies he fights on daily basis in post apocalyptic monster and meta human infested earth —————————————- After reading the current chapter I thought What if Cale is worshipped as an avatar of the absolute God Preface of Clopeh Caleism bible He represents values of all gods He is chaos He is justice He is Hope He is death He is fire He is protection He is war He is balance He is time He is a dragon He is the world tree! He is a king He is a hero He is a conman man He is a crazy bastard He is a regular bastard! He is everything! He is the ultimate ‘avatar’ the incarnation of the absolute God on this mortal plane! And since Cale has come to the demon world There should be seven demon kings or at least seven apostles to represent the seven sins? Or seven demon Nobel families and one royal demon family But there are also 100 named demon kings in biblical narratives so…
The Young master’s banquet —————————————— The Heituse Duchy was awaiting the return of their young master Cale with bated breathe Just recently word had been sent thy Cale would return to celebrate a huge banquet. Cale’s adventures had now become part of myth and folklore of the duchy. Everytime he returned Cale would bring some strange treasures and queer people. The citizens had seen dwarves, dragons, beastmen, assassins, elves you name it Little children who usually would never be exposed to such diversity could now liste every single race in existence. “I tell ya! The Young master beat the crap out of the white star with a single ston!” Orfius the knight guard said to his senior Lucius Lucius snorted “Ha that’s it, I with my have seen him sacrifice himself to save the people. Even cough blood and gain injuries!” Origins and Lucius kept arguing on who saw the best moments of Master Cale. Such arguments were a regular occurrence across the Duchy. Aside from Cale the other Heroes like Choi Han, Mary and Lock were well known as well. Choi Han was called ‘The gentle wolf’ because his kind behaviour to the citizens contrasted with his ferocious aura. Mary was none as the ‘The Kind witch’ similar because she kind to children but could command black magic and necromancy Lock was simple called ‘The cry baby warrior’ because he cried a lot and was also a strong beast man. In the minds do citizens Eurhaben was considered a legendary ‘Emperor of the Elves’ partly because they hadn’t realised he was dragon. And also because all the elves who came to duchy would always prostrate on the ground themselves the moment the saw him. The day Cale returned he came along with a huge troupe of soldiers who called themselves ‘Dragon- Half Bloods’. Who came along with the Pope of their religion. There was quite a talk among the citizens about this strange new religion Rachael the daughter of the bar owner said “I heard they worship dragons!” Her uncle Raymond shook his and said “No, I heard they came from another world!” Rachael asked “Did Young master save another world again?” A mercenary with blue stood up suddenly and shouted “I-I-hiccups, fought with Cale Heintuse in the Eastern Continent. He wokd-hiccup for my mercenary company. He saved two continents! What’s there in saving the wo-worldd-hiccup” Most the people I the bar simply ignored his words as the rambling’s inebriated drunkard, unaware that he was indeed the legendary mercenary king bud. The day after Cale arrived tents were set up at Harris village and constructions of various kinds were being built. The curious citizens who enquired what exactly was being built were told it was an ‘Amusement Park’. Rumours of Cale’s ‘Birthday’ also spread among the citizens, even though it was false every citizen indeed believed it was Cale’s birthday despite his attempts to clear his misunderstanding.
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I just read the chapter 350 Book 2!!! Cale and the crown prince discussing the plan in the New World and about Ahn Roh man.... Spoiler alert!!! Chapter 351 book 2... Crown prince reading news in new world and cale return the roan to move in earth 3....
Does Cale get a power up in part 2 and does he find any solution to strengthen his plate as he is going around to different worlds as there may be solution for that in a different world.
Spoiler: Not really a spoiler I've finally circled back around to TCF and found Teriri's amazing summaries (I never read the spoiler pages here it's just too much to sort through) (in her 250s where Aipotu is starting to pick up) and wow, I'm seriously going to lose my shit if Cale becomes a god. I can't with all the flags that say that's what coming. I'll be so pissed to have wasted so many years of my life on TCF if that's the ending. I mean, who knows, maybe YRH author-nim will swing it so it makes sense, but I just don't think it would add up with everything that's been established in Cale's characterization. ETA: ugh okay, on Pt 2 Ch 327...I guess only a god can fight gods???? But once you become a god, it's not easy to stop being one ://// Yes, it's mentioned in Aipotu that he can strengthen his plate by helping Aipotu/the World Tree. Spoiler: Part 2 Ch 257 Source: https://teriri-sayes.tumblr.com/post/743090446340849664/reactions-to-chaos-creators-chapter-257 ETA and https://teriri-sayes.tumblr.com/pos...eactions-to-the-incomprehensibles-chapter-327
A guide to creating greate story ideas or premises that tick ——————————————————————————— “The premise is your story stated in one sentence. It is the simplest combination of character and plot and typically consists of some event that starts the action, some sense of the main character, and some sense of the outcome of the story. Some examples: ■ The Godfather: The youngest son of a Mafia family takes revenge on the men who shot his father and becomes the new Godfather. ■ Moonstruck: While her fiance visits his mother in Italy, a woman falls in love with the man's brother. ■ Casablanca: A tough American expatriate rediscovers an old flame only to give her up so that he can fight the Nazis. ■ A Streetcar Named Desire: An aging beauty tries to get a man to marry her while under constant attack from her sister's brutish husband. ■ Star Wars: When a princess falls into mortal danger, a young man uses his skills as a fighter to save her and defeat the evil forces of a galactic empire. There are all kinds of practical reasons why a good premise is so crucial to your success. First, Hollywood is in the business of selling movies worldwide, with a big chunk of the revenue coming the opening weekend. So producers look for a premise that is "high concept"—meaning that the film can be reduced to a catchy one-line description that audiences will understand instantly and come rushing to the theater to see. Second, your premise is your inspiration. It's the "lightbulb" moment when you say, "Now that would make a terrific story," and that excitement gives you the perseverance to go through months, even years, of hard writing. This leads to another important point: for better or worse, the premise is also your prison. As soon as you decide to pursue one idea, there are potentially thousands of ideas that you won't be writing about. So you'd better be happy with the special world you've chosen. KEY POINT: What you choose to write about is far more important than any decision you make about how to write it. One last reason you must have a good premise is that it's the one decision on which every other decision you make during the writing process is based. Character, plot, theme, symbol—it all comes out of this story idea. If you fail at the premise, nothing else will help. If a building's foundation is flawed, no amount of work on the floors above will make the building stable. You may be terrific at character, a master at plot, or a genius at dialogue. But if your premise is weak, there is nothing you can do to save the story. KEY POINT: Nine out of ten writers fail at the premise. The big reason so many writers fail here is that they don't know how to develop the idea, how to dig out the gold that's buried within it. They don't realize that the great value of a premise is that it allows you to explore the full story, and the many forms it might take, before you actually write it. Premise is a classic example of where a little knowledge is a dangerous thing. Most screenwriters know the importance Hollywood places on having a high-concept premise. What they don't know is that this marketing pitch is never going to tell them what the organic story demands.” - The anatomy of storytelling “Find the Designing Principle Given the problems and the promises inherent in your idea, you must now come up with an overall strategy for how you will tell your story. Your overall story strategy, stated in one line, is the designing principle of your story. The designing principle helps you extend the premise into deep structure. KEY POINT: The designing principle is what organizes the story as a whole. It is the internal logic of the story, what makes the parts hang together organically so that the story becomes greater than the sum of its parts. It is what makes the story original. In short, the designing principle is the seed of the story. And it is the single most important factor in making your story original and effective. Sometimes this principle is a symbol or a metaphor (known as the central symbol, the grand metaphor, or the root metaphor). But it is often larger than that. The designing principle tracks the fundamental process that will unfold over the course of the story. The designing principle is difficult to see. And in truth, most stories don't have one. They are standard stories, told generically. That's the difference between a premise, which all stories have, and a designing principle—which only good stories have. The premise is concrete; it's what actually happens. The designing principle is abstract; it is the deeper process going on in the story, told in an original way. Stated in one line: Designing principle = story process + original execution Let's say you are a writer who wants to show the intimate workings of the Mafia in America, as literally hundreds of screenwriters and novelists have done. If you were really good, you might come up with this designing principle (for The Godfather): Use the classic fairy-tale strategy of showing how the youngest of three sons becomes the new "king." What's important is that the designing principle is the "synthesizing idea," the "shaping cause"1 of the story; it's what internally makes the story a single unit and what makes it different from all other stories. KEY POINT: Find the designing principle, and stick to it. Be diligent in discovering this principle, and never take your eye off it during the long writing process. Let's take a look at Tootsie to see how the difference between the premise and the designing principle plays out in an actual story. ■ Premise When an actor can't get work, he disguises himself as a woman and gets a role in a TV series, only to fall in love with one of the female members of the cast. ■ Designing Principle Force a male chauvinist to live as a woman. How do you find the designing principle in your premise? Don't make the mistake most writers make at this point. Instead of coming up with a unique designing principle, they pick a genre and impose it on the premise and then force the story to hit the beats (events) typical of that genre. The result is mechanical, generic, unoriginal fiction. You find the designing principle by teasing it out of the simple one-line premise you have before you. Like a detective, you "induce" the form of the story from the premise. This doesn't mean that there is only one designing principle per idea or that it's fixed or predetermined. There are many possible designing principles or forms that you can glean from your premise and by which you can develop your story. Each gives you different possibilities of what to say, and each brings inherent problems that you must solve. Again, let your technique help you out. One way of coming up with a designing principle is to use a journey or similar traveling metaphor. Huck Finn's raft trip down the Mississippi River with Jim, Marlow's boat trip up the river into the "heart of darkness," Leopold Bloom's travels through Dublin in Ulyses” Examples Here are some designing principles in books, films, and plays, from the Bible all the way to the Harry Potter books, and how they differ from the premise line. Moses, in the Book of Exodus ■ Premise When an Egyptian prince discovers that he is a Hebrew, he leads his people out of slavery. ■ Designing Principle A man who does not know who he is struggles to lead his people to freedom and receives the new moral laws that will define him and his people. Ulysses ■ Premise Track a day in the life of a common man in Dublin. ■ Designing Principle In a modern odyssey through the city, over the course of a single day, one man finds a father and the other man finds a son. Four Weddings and a Funeral ■ Premise A man falls in love with a woman, but first one and then the other is engaged to someone else. ■ Designing Principle A group of friends experiences four Utopias (weddings) and a moment in hell (funeral) as they all look for their right partner in marriage. Harry Potter Books ■ Premise A boy discovers he has magical powers and attends a school for magicians. ■ Designing Principle A magician prince learns to be a man and a king by attending a boarding school for sorcerers over the course of seven school years. The Sting ■ Premise Two con artists swindle a rich man who killed one of their friends. ■ Designing Principle Tell the story of a sting in the form of a sting, and con both the opponent and the audience. Long Day's Journey into Night ■ Premise A family deals with the mother's addiction. ■ Designing Principle As a family moves from day into night, its members are confronted with the sins and ghosts of their past. Meet Me in St. Louis ■ Premise A young woman falls in love with the boy next door. ■ Designing Principle The growth of a family over the course of a year is shown by events in each of the four seasons. Copenhagen ■ Premise Three people tell conflicting versions of a meeting that changed the outcome of World War II. ■ Designing Principle Use the Heisenberg uncertainty principle from physics to explore the ambiguous morality of the man who discovered it. A Christmas Carol ■ Premise When three ghosts visit a stingy old man, he regains the spirit of Christmas. ■ Designing Principle Trace the rebirth of a man by forcing him to view his past, his present, and his future over the course of one Christmas Eve. - An Anthology of storytelling
TCF world building —————- Somehow I feel the world building has become a bit too set in stone? Maybe it needs more blurring/melting or lossening of its rules and lore? Like now maybe there are other waves to cross worlds aside from karma? Through purgatory worlds (like bleach), wormholes or pure spiritual power. The rules are kind of set now There is demonic and divine Eelam and race there are single lifers, there is reincarnation, there are gods, there are wanderers and there worlds with consiouness. How much more can the world be explored more? Every magical world has a world tree, there leaves and dark elves, dragons and Beastmen and kingdoms the rules are always the same It becomes predictable for the reader if the rules are the same. We always now how it can be broken It would be great to break the template with gods and detail a TCF ancient history where there were ‘No Gods’ The current age being the ‘Age of Gods’ (which is why you have an obsession with omnipotent god) And a prior age with no gods The age of Chaos and anarchy? If that was a possibility than the ‘God of Chaos’s’ goal can change form creating an omnipotent gif to destroying all existing gods, orr at least taking their power away. And restore age of chaos Proababky it regards to whether Cale will becomes a god or not he will forever be denial and become akin to a wanderer like CJS Since Wanderers are gods who refuse to be gods
I've kind of neglected reading the Novel. Can you please tell me what world Cale and team are in now? Is it Wuxia or something else?
Hi, i stopped reading on part 1 after they find out about hunters and when they went inside the temple of the sealed god. Is this still good? Why are they travelling to other worlds?
I think Cale should pass the title of duke to his siblings seriously so that he can continue with his world hopping adventures and at the same time respect org Cale,s wishes to pass on the successor title to ha s younger siblings It’s good to me but that is actually very subjective among the fan base right now. You will have to read for yourself and decide for yourself they are world hopping in order to destroy Hunter families and rescue the various world they hijacked from being destroyed The sealed god was a hunter and the hunter are seven ancient families who wished to create an ‘Absolute God’ by collecting karma. Through killing single lifers, genocide and destroying world (which is why their gods have titles like god of despair) They are the ones who planted and helped the White Star. And in the beginning of Part 2 they attack the Raon Kingdoms through series of terrorist attacks the Royal Place and Orsena duchy and the merchant guild causing the massacre of hundreds of civilians.And Alberu’s father the king goes missing And Cale decided to hunt down the Hunters and catch the culprit. A Traitor called Karin Orsena who abducted her youngest sibling who was the sole survivor of the duchy family she massacres
What are the most powerful beings (including gods, dragons, etc.) in this series (if you can rank them from weakest to strongest I would appreciate it) and what abilities does each one possess?
I think the current game world need to work toward some Goal or climax What if the end of the game world scenarios is the virtual world AI self destructing while releasing the millions of NPCs into the real world? Or what if the Hunters plan to raise an huge army within the game world and open a portal to Earth 3 to conquer it? I wonder if wanderers are resentful isekai protagonists The warrior returns manhwa featured isekai protagonists who have returned to a world who hates them after killing the various demon lords There are hundreds of returnees with powers in this comic split into righteous protagonists vs Resentful take over the worlds isekai protagonists This is what a user Glutton Priestess on discord says - That's... basically what they are, to my understanding? Wanderers are "heroes" - subjective term, they can accomplish "great deeds" on scale from saving the world from destruction to downright genocide - who ascended above the mortal restrictions after death, but rejected godhood (I assume because that position comes with strings that limit their freedom, even if it technically gives more power). So calling them "resentful protagonists" is pretty much on the nose. They're post-story characters who were powerful enough to be MCs of their own stories. That's what protagonists are. ....so when you look at them from THAT perspective, I suppose Hunters are side-characters who try to cheat their way to protagonist status?? And that makes Cale the "very, VERY reluctant hero protagonists" <:wheezus:841167445854257173>
It would be cool to meet other Choi family members among the wanders in the divine race, demonic race and hunters since GoD said that every generation of the Choi Family has produced a single lifer? Maybe there was even a Choi Single lifer in the Joseon era or the Silla kingdom era of Korea etc in the current arc there is a wanderer call So Hee and Choi Han stiffens when he sees her real face. So she a Choi Family cousin? Perhaps a niece?