LCD Haroon

many thanks for the hard work!

 

You're very welcome. Channy is the one doing the most work, though. Translating is the bulk of the job.
Also, this chapter is like 3x longer than usual, so it takes some time to finish it. Please be patient

 

I wanted to try reading it since I like LMS and game genre.
But seems like a lot give it low rating, review say it is due to grammar. So is the grammar that unbearable? But I can see some good plot.
Probably bookmarking it and read later when I got time~

 

The thing I hated most about LMS is that it kept shifting from Game to Real Life at seemingly random intervals, and that Weed was playing an MMO more like an RTS.
IE: Building massive NPC armies with very little player interaction, outside the whole "JAPTEM!" shit and when he eventually went back to town to sell. His quests are largely solo and on the off chance he allows others to tag along they are utterly useless because he's just gonna spend 5 chapters to carve the perfect statue for the situation and rally a 20,000 NPC army out of nowhere.

If this is a more realistic VRMMO then it's worth a shot even if the grammar is rough in the early chapters, providing it's by an actual translator and not MTL with attempted interpretation.

I'll give the first volume a try.

 

dunno on what they're talking 'bout it's pretty readable for me

hmmm so far rl perspective are quite few aside from the beginning and he just usually returns to rl when he needs to stock up his nutritional serums or something. And Harun is more on RPG adventure based on the translated chapters so far

 

The grammar mistakes are a non-issue. You'd have to be VERY easily annoyed for it to effect you.

It reads more like a transmigration story so far, the RL parts are pretty much non-existent and how "real" the NPCs are I'm not sure the other worker trainees are other players or not. I imagine there will be real-life arcs otherwise the pod training his real life body would have nearly no purpose.

The biggest comparison to LMS is how terribly he treats his pet. The so called "rule with an iron fist" method of beating them into submission. I'm not a fan of either extremes, such as the lovey-dovey Only Sense Online pets or the general abuse of LMS.

 

well it's still on the early chapter and although the way he treat brat is kinda extreme but brat is one of the so called ancient elemental or something and the pride of that elemental will make him harder to tame on normal route like giving affection/food and the likes

 

I left a rather unflattering review of Harun on NU because of its poor English. I'll take a look at the newly edited and proofread content sometime in the next week and update my review if it's warranted. I'm looking forward to being able to enjoy the story once it's been given some TLC.

 

Every review helps! I appreciate it.
I don't think all the text will be revised within the next week, but the upcoming chapter is.

I am truly sorry I couldn't deliver best out of the novel, making people to be distracted by my English.
With this mindset, I am trying my best to get better and better.
Hopefully I can learn a lot from the proofreaders and make the translation much better than now.
Until then, Please be patient with me!

 

If the revision won't be done in the next week, I'll hold off on revisiting your translation until you've fixed up the old chapters. Please let me know when you've updated the older chapters so that I can take a look and update my review.

 

I have been thinking about this, but we haven't actually discussed it yet. However, it's definitely on the menu, so we'll be sure to notify you if/when the chapters have been updated.
Cheers!

 

Sorry for disturbing you, but I would like to know when there will be a new chapter of Harun/Haroon?

Many thanks in advance!


P.S. Really like it so far, keep it going!
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It's up!

 

Thank you very much! can't wait for the next one!
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@Channy_ What is the time length between updates?

 

actually, I'd like to know that as well.
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I am trying to make it 1chapter/5 days, but I can't guarentee as I am still a student, and it even got longer for this time(v2c8 p2) as this was our(me and editors) first time collaborating together. We should be back to normal schedule pretty soon.

 

Thanks a lot!
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@Channy_ I'm very sorry for disturbing you, but i would really like to know when The next chapter will come out.

again, I am incredibly sorry, Milord/Milady Channy_!
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I am trying my best! It has been a busy weekend :/

Milady it is!

Thank you for your patience!